Each waking moment, night and day
Intensely so I yearn for you
And every moment you're away
My heart feels like it's gone askew
Each time you simply look at me
My spirit soars into the sky
So much I'd love with you to be
I dream and breathe a longing sigh
Each word your perfect lips release
Enchants me with its very sound
The only times that I feel peace
Are times in which you might be found
Each time I felt these things before
They never meant as much as this
I know it's you whom I adore
Imagining when first we kiss
Each thought of you just seems so real
My words cannot my heart express
So deeply now this way I feel
Can be described as happiness
A contest entry
- THE ULTIMATE LOVE STORY by bookworm987.
400 points, ended February 15, 46 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Amazing
This has beauty and great rhyme, this really is a fabulous love poem, souch strong rhymes in beautiful words! Well written. Well done for winning in the contest you entered, Great job! Have a nice day
Lana
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So beautiful
i love it. its just so wonderful!! awsome job
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This is a lovely poem ...
expressing the condition love should instigate: happiness. Well done, Poet; and good luck in this contest.
Love
Myra
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This was beautiful. Nice rhyming, not forced at all. I loved how you ended up describing the emotion as "happiness"; it's such an understated word but speaks volumes in this poem. Truly tugged at my heart.
[Liz<3]
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