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Courage

Fledgling first flight
of a baby bald eagle.
It’s crown of white absent,
yet it mantles a first kill
as if mature in it’s plumage

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Prompt: Say it in exactly five lines and in or under 40 words.....

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    February 16

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    Interesting take on the prompt. Love the imagery! Thanks for writing for my contest. I'm honored to have you show your work here.


  • Denerica
    February 16

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    Original...I sometimes don't want to picture nature doing what it must do. Sure expresses courage. Blessings.


  • nOva-
    February 7

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    Hmm. Intersting message communicated in a rather original way. I can go for that Nice take on the prompt. Bold write! Enjoyed this. Good luck,

    ~nva