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From a Grave

From a Grave
So it says
Anyways, did you miss I?
The soil that embedded itself in my nostrils still smells of tendrils
That smell is harrowing
However, heroin will always be mellowing
Swallowing is a beautiful reflex
I thought the world had grown darker, along with my heart
It turns out that somebody painted the walls of my spastic pump a bitter black
I blame the Germans, but only because it's easy
All is not right in the World, but you still exist, as do your words, crazy and delicate as ever
So, the questions remain
Ever shagged to Van Morrison? Did you miss I?

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Written February 20th, 2004

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  • vampira1665 silver member
    April 1, 2004
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    You are confusing as hell, but I am addicted, I think I am in love...with your work. More please!

    Hugs and bites, Lady Raven


  • only one father
    April 1, 2004
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    cool nice going!


  • March 5, 2004
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    Your poetry is my guilty pleasure...you speak of twisted emotions I can't put to words, lol. Great job.

    Jenn


  • DistantWorld
    February 26, 2004
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    Wow I loved this peace it left me wondering and thinking I could feel your feeling good job

  • fredhib
    February 20, 2004
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    I DONT KNOW Could I have actually missed I - not really sure that Ive missed shaggin anyone - but your a long time dead so they say actually


  • plinkyponk
    February 20, 2004
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    well i just got into it and it ended...i read it really slowly twice and its very temptingly wierd..i love wierd..enjoyed it..ever shagged to van morrison is such a contrast to the rest and then you give us did you miss i so it leaves you smiling and wanting more

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