Skies darken we stood embraced
observing star-burst comets
an astrological beauty afar.
Under Luns's mystical eye
that fell upon waves splashing
gentle, tidal enhancing each star.
Eyes were piercing my inner soul
silent words engraved in thought
acknowledging we were not alone.
Stirring our paradise of beauty
freedom lost; our fears boiled
captured without mobile phone.
Odd men stood nude; no garments
over us in volitional bliss
probing our minds, outer skins.
Huge dark eyes focused like
a volcanic vortex of stars in pitch
is this redemption of our sins?
I was stripped examined, touched
close attention given to reproduction
thank GOD Dolly they have no penis.
As the leader towered over me
inserting his long finger swelling
sensations betrayed between us.
Such rapid growth, vicious kicks
his spawn developed inside only seven
days I gave birth, then I cried.
Twins: one human, one alien
created to rule worlds new order
invaded demise wishing I could of died.
Never saw my mate again; found out
he was a sexual slave to hideous
females each sperm counted for.
Increasing their species; billions
of offspring their leader I adored
his finger kept me wanton for more.
"Our children will unite soon, I have
been told stranger things can
happen under the spring moon."
Author notes
prompt: The Aliens kidnap you, your girl friend/boy friend with the celebrity you like most; and place you on a planet like Eden.
Celebrity: Dolly Parton
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- Pure Fantasy in Imagination ..... by nature mithya.
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Comments
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So unique, intense and moving. Very enjoyable, last two paragraphs i think must be my favourites
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Superb Plus +
A most unique write, indeed, with the exception of the dark elements, it reminded me of Earth Mother Religions. Very well written.
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oh dolly!! :p
yeah, this is good my friend, great imagery and a very intense and engaging story throughout! loved this piece..
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