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Silence






Silent imagination descends
    ~armageddon intuitions~
          entwined in
          her dreams palate..
…pale.

Infinite void in her
    panache
        sits on her lips
            like a solemn lullaby
placed upon the dearth of reality.









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Prompt: http://oloferla.deviantart.com/art/Autumn-49089735
30 words

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    June 4

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    Liked this shortie Preets
    ..it's leaving me in a kind of sad feeling after reading it....

    Hope your day's are much better

    XXJeannette


  • Kari gold member
    February 7
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    I liked this one. Loved the abstract feel to it.


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 7

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    "Her dreams palate pale"
    I loved this line. It rolled off the tongue in whispers.

    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck

    Shari

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