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Island of failed Revelations

Him and Her
They together
Though so different
Interpretations lost
To failures in translation

Piercing shards of
Unanswered questions
Torture both as they
Look across at the other
Not seeing each other
But each looking for
Their own answer

She looking down the
never ending spiral
leading deep inside
her most perfect
and secret places
to find it

He looking onward
to the next element
to fit into the puzzle
that which he hopes
will lead him to the
next piece, helping
him to find it

Neither right
Both not wrong
Together stare
At the truth
Blindly

Not finding anything
On their own search
They turn to the other
Expecting perhaps
Better luck
And so eyes
Meet

_________      ________
/ She finds  \  /  He sees  \
\  it in his    \/ it in her  /
\  core        wholeness /

/  Together the pair  \
|    see the answer    |
\      in the 'they'      /

\And the silence/
\Is filled with/
\The quiet/
\Answer/
\Yes.../
\    /
\  /
\/
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Idk, tripe and cliché I know... Just something that came from a thought...

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