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As it Flows

Squash my dreams
Like a summer bug.
Let the memories flow
Out of my open wounds.
Let the midnight moon takes it rise

The river flows,
Across the rocks,
Like the pain,
Flowing through my veins.
The sun shines no longer.

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  • angelsslayer
    April 29
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    Nice imagery in this one. Vivid write.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    March 1

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    Ihis is pretty good detail and flow of words, Squash my dreams don't sound to happy. Well it was wonderful to read

  • Arjun Karath
    February 8

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    woow cool imagination....Squash my dreams
    Like a summer bug.the first line itslf packes in a complete punch!!!kudos


  • Denerica silver member
    February 7
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    Nice depiction of let it flow, an acceptance of reality. Blessings.