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Desert

delirium run
with scarlet clouds unvieling
a first trembles glance

A contest entry

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  • Arkbear gold member
    February 7

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    Interesting......I will have to give this some thought -

     

    I see your visuals, and I feel something touching me.....not sure about it winning, but it definately has something going on....God bless & thank you for supporting this contest,

     

    Bear ~

    • saddie23
      February 8
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      Bear

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given. I'd hope to have learned the tools here and gave it my best shot yet. Saddie23