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Freezing!



harsh goosebumps
invading my flesh,
breathing in your coldness
leaves me wanting
that big thick quilt,
damn it's cold!


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option b, what i'm thinking about

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 13, 2009

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    Damn ~

    You used an incredible word choice in this; I love the imagery of the goosebumps invading - scared me and stunned me

    Brillance!
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • luna-midnight silver member
    February 8, 2009

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    haha, omg, yes its been so cold here these months, haha, give me hot coco, please? hope you are warmer! thanks for entering and take care
    Stephanie ♥