I can feel it coming softly-
Love, like a whisper in the wind...
It encircles my heart,
Confines my mind...
I pray that it never ends.
A contest entry
- PreWrite contest for my favorites/AP family/and group!!! by Kathraina.
1055 points, ended February 15, 290 entries
Honorable mention
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Definitely like this piece. I can feel the emotion in it, and can completely empathise. This is a great piece, well done. Thanks for entering!
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haha thanks!
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Wishing the best, thank you
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no, i believe the thanks go to you! lol
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Short and sweet.
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I love your word choice and beauty and simplicity of this piece. Great job =)
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Awh! thanks so much girl
i appreciate it!!!
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This is very lovely and sentimental. Nicely done. Thanks for writing for my contest. I'm honored to have you show your work here.
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When love whispers sweet nothings in your ear, well written. Blessings.
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Judged-ola!
Beautiful words.
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