Nothing heard but the tenderness
of baby breaths caught
in air filled with love
and the whispers of tomorrow
calling.
(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson
February 6, 2009
A contest entry
- Whispers by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended February 20, 33 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So softly and tenderly written. Elegant and beautiful. Lovely write.
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Kim
Thank you so much for the gold.. it is a blessings and joy. I enjoyed the contest. Hugs.. d -
Hoodwinked
This is very sweet and nice. It is as soft as a lullaby. Good luck to you in your contest and all your future writes. You been hoodwinked by a Poetic Bandit. -
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Lady Altheia
Thank you so much !! Blessings !! d
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HOOD WINK
Very sweet and well describe your love.
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Sandra
Thank you so much !! d
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You have been HOOD WINKED by The Poetic Bandits. This is your day in the spotlight - enjoy! Lovely take on the theme of this contest - so easy to read and understand. Sentiments well expressed in these lines. Liked the whispers of tomorrow -
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grannyyeri
Thank you all.. I was wondering why I kept seeing hood-winked. And, thank you so much for your lovely comments. Blessings. Debby
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HOOD~WINKED!!!
this is so gentle . it just touches the old heart strings. thank you for sharing your talent. keep writing! God bless you always
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debilynn
Thankyou so much... God bless you too.. always..
d
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Hood-Wink!
Beautifully tender ~
This is so sweet and charming; it reaches through page and touches the hearts of the readers and makes them smile
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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Angel
Thank you for your lovely comments. Blessings.d
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HOODWINKED!
This is very sweet, and what an excellent use of the word prompt. Nothing is more exciting than a young one, and their life ahead.
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azure
Thank you so much !! Blessings. d
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BINGO !
You have captured the essence of expression. You let the reader see the infant as you assuredly have. "the whisper of tomorrow calling" defines not only this contest but you as a portal to shared visions. Such a wonderfully descriptive offering.
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wtchr
Thank you for your kind and thoughtfull comment. Blessing. d
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The tender innocence of a baby breathing and the hope of tomorrow.....lovely. Thanks for writing for my contest. I'm honored to have you show your work here.
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:)
Thank you. It's a pleasure to write for your contest. God bless. d
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Beautiful sentiments about a child...well captured in hearts. Blessings.
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Denerica
Thank you so much... God Bless ! d
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Gorgeous, Full of Love
Oh, my Sis Debby, this is so beautiful! I can imagine you feeling this everytime you look at your grandbaby: she is a beauty, you know. This is a winner and I expect it to take GOLD!
Much luv & hugs, SisBon 
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My Bon
Thank you. Miss Brooklyn is a character.. lol.. much like her grandmother.. They all are actually. My oldest grandson just got his driver's licence and a job.. He turned 16 in January. He is a handsome young man and a real sweetheart. Actually, in my eyes.. they are all wonderful. I love children. Mine, my siblings.. my grandies, and all the other's i've adopted. Much love.. d
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