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...To Be Without. . .











the crinkled priest is at peace and chaste
he doesn't fight wars, just gobbles hors d'oeuvres
he confesses many sins, but sits in a bin
and when he thinks the church is hollow he follows
into secret private chambers where
millions of dead babies on his hands will be









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  • StupidxGirl
    February 7

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    This is very powerful.
    So much that I really don't feel the need to cheapen my comment with too many words.
    Just know,
    this was good.