Lost in your eyes
You're touch is all I crave
But deprived I remain
I beg you in the morning
And in the depth of the night
I call to you in my sleep
But you still do not seem to hear
I wish to show you my love
Smother you for eternity
But for you I try to give you
The space you desire
A space that I do not understand
And for that reason I am numd
From my own misunderstanding
You are my one true reason that I am here
I dont have much to offer
But I do what I can
If I could give you my eyes
For every time you look at yourself
And tell me what you think is wrong
Only then would you see just how beautiful
You trully are
Just one of a kind
You are everything that I could desire
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oh oh oh my goodness i love this so much. so touching i loved it! great great write
ki
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Beautiful write, Benji. I really liked the part of space. It provokes a lot of thought. While it's true that sometimes people do need their space, sometimes it can be hard if another person doesn't understand why. Follow your heart in life. Love shall come in it's own time.
Keep that pen flowing.
Haley Mary
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wow.
Lota emotion here, my friend. This was an intense read! I really liked the ending, it's a beautiful idea.
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