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Chaotic Hope

Missing image
And as the darkness,
Seeps,
Consumes...

And as my heart
Wrenches,
Convulses...

And as I watch my fate
Dissolve...

I wonder.

Shamelessly hoping
For the light.

For the guiding beacon
Through despair.

~ ~ ~

Never a kindling
Of hope.

My beacon...
Gone.
Never existing.
A figment of my imagination..

Never to be realized.

Harborless mind.
Irrevocable chaos.

Never to be found.
Never to begin.

Author notes

AP name: liduen

Picture Prompt: http://ziyakasapoglu.deviantart.com/art/Hard-Days-112020632

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  • Candy Morphine
    February 14

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    Okay; well just reading through, this line:
    "And as I my heart"
    didn't really make sense.

    the last line really held the air of the poem perfectly. Well written.


    • liduen silver member
      February 14
      Edit | Reply
      Thanks for noticing that. It was a typo. The line was supposed to be "And as my heart"

      Thanks for the comment!

  • Candy Morphine
    February 6
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    Title:
    It feels like my heart's draining from my eyes.

    Picture:
    http://ziyakasapoglu.deviantart.com/art/Hard-Days-112020632


    Hope you like, If you don't; then feel free to ask for a new one=]