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Shaded Purple Summers

Blossom bursting with fragrance
Hanging from pillar-like trees.
Mossy greens and warm browns
Embrace all in mulchy bliss.
Sun-kissed breeze and raindrops
Accent a perfection already reached.
Each passing year it grows stronger,
With melancholy and wisdom.
Shaded purple summers caress
Hidden loving hugs of freedom.

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Written February 6, 2009.

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  • ladyhelenaofsorrows
    February 22

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    A lovely piece, with strong imagery. Very well crafted! I love the line "Embrace all in mulchy bliss," and the sweet simplicity of it is excellent. Thank you for entering, I'm adding you to the finalists' list.
    -Lena


  • Lady Michaella
    February 20

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    wow... this is incredibly beautiful.... such stunning use of imagery and poetic device... very well penned. brownie points for this one

    thanks for entering my contest!
    and best of luck to you!!


    your judge,
    -Lemon Bee-
    xx


  • Paloszoo gold member
    February 17

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    A very serene look at summer with beautiful, graceful imagery. Well done! Thanks for writing for my contest. Good luck. I'm honored to have you show your work here.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 12

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    I love the imagery and the flow
    descriptive of a summer we all yearn for
    Please correct your spellings
    Best wishes
    Julie


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 7
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    Lovely visuals hun, but I'd run this through spell-check if I were you.

    All the best,

    mj.


  • Topaze gold member
    February 7
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    Very nice, it reminds me of lilacs and the wonderful fragrance. Well done, and my best wishes.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 7
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    a beautiful tkae on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa

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