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Not growing up

I will never grow up.
Not ever.
You cannot make me.
I can pretend to be mature.
But I am not.
Not ever.
I may grow old and wise
but I am still young.
Forever and ever.

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  • Kammii Lee
    July 13
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    I feel like that all the time...


  • Adelaine
    February 18

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    Claps.

    Being young gives one of the best feelings in the whole world.

    I never want to grow old.

    Good write.

    - Adelaine


  • rbruce gold member
    February 16

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    I wish !!! I am already old by many measurements, but I do not envy you your youth. For i have my second childhood. I can be utterly stupid with grandchildren and no one criticises me. Stay as sweet as you are. Wonderful sentiments.