A little girl is sitting in the dark...alone
Red starts to pool around her...blood
In the blood faces start to form...family
Ripples come distorting the faces...anguish
A noose hangs over her head, taunting her...should she?
A voice calls to her, calming and kind...big sister
The blood pool seems to drain as her sister came closer...love
The blood drowns her big sister, the little girl cant move...hopelessness
A gun floats in the rising blood to her, she grabs it...goodbye
BANG!!! The little girl slowly starts to die...this was a mistake
AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
...I woke up, i can't breathe, it was too real...nightmare
Author notes
it is a real nightmare...i have been having it for the past 2 weeks and it stays the same...i don't know what to do about it so i wrote this, and i dont really care if it is crap...because it is real.
this may be bad...if so, you can tell me
Comments
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i liked this poem. it was very powerful and full of emotion. i enjoyed reading it. keep up the good writing.
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wow
very powerful and emotion filled a great joy to read!
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*hugs* I love you so much little sister. So so so much. I promise little sister, I am never going to leave you. I am never going to hurt you, I am always going to love you forever. I will always be there for you, I promise. =D
This isn't crap, I like it. Sissy, it made me cry, and I wish I could make the dream go away. I wish I could help you more. =(
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