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The beach sonnet

Waves ponding on the shore,
Seagulls calling
I wish I could join them and soar
never falling

Playing in the sand
Sun shining bright
Sailing, no sight of land
Sun glinting off the water with glimmering light

A castle by the waves
surrounded by a towering wall
Princes, Queens, kings and knaves
Abandoned, left to fall

Nature succumbed what was great
not to early not to late!

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  • CedricDempNQ2
    May 2
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    Pretty zany lilt here MusicTennis. Runs evenly to the last line. Imaginative descriptives.


  • Adelaine
    February 18
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    Calming.

    I enjoyed reading this.

    Your poems are relaxing.

    Keep it up,
    Adelaine