Tapping the time
He casually walked the line
In the space between dreams
Rent and torn
Tears telling a tale
Yearning
So long and farewell
Effervescent encounters of the mysterious kind
Very strong
Every song
Nothing but a whispering in his ear
Sell him some semblance of hope
Every leaf that falls fears the fire
Churlish ire that bold desire
Over cooked on the pyre
Nothing scares him more
Down there in the glittering dark
Swimming amongst silken simmerings of spidery lore
Author notes
...feb 6
A contest entry
- CLICK HERE!!! by Rhapsody.
467 points, ended March 16, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best February Prewrites from These Dates: by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended March 2, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Respect is asked for, given and understood... :)
Comments
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Quite an interesting write. I enjoyed it! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!
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O. ps. thanks for entering a new one, i'm getting tired of PW's
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oh, i c it clearer now. my comp was slow loading the backround
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agh, tis hard to read. i like. Which option did you choose?
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I hope you find this amusing...
I was going to enter a prewrite, but saw that you had quite a few of those so I entered a fresh one, all the while not thinking to make it one of the options as I had changed my mind so suddenly. If you want me to remove it I can.
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just a note.... try thinking of a different word other than tapping...cause it shows up in your poetry a ton.
Other than that, this poem spins about in a very mysterious and enchanting fashion.
always a pleasure.
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Didn't have much of a choice on this one. Due to the chosen structure the first letter of the first line had to be a "T."
And you're right, the word is in a lot of my work.
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