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irish snow

It falls on my long lashes
before I even see,
another one kisses quickly
melting on my lips

I look above at grey skies,
they fall together
singing a soft heaven song

they pinch every nerve of mine with cold
and giggle;
under the wet coat
I freeze, I frown

shivering inside large boots
my feet walk fast
the hush of wind whispers
a prank

I grab
a handful of frost;
I swallow, I smile

but they fall again
and tease me more




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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    June 17

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    That was absolutely beautiful. So I take it you're enjoying Ireland? How have you been?
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Doom Fridge
    April 3
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    awesome


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 7

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    THIS IS LOVELY!!!!

    What a beautiul poem about snow and cold!!!! I love to be outside in a soft snowfall, it is so relaxing and calm.

    • Ankeeta silver member
      February 7
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      thanks for the comment

      yes i love when there are soft snowflakes. and its just beautifully to walk in that snowfall especially holding hand of your loved one its my first experience with snow and I am loving it