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Tears of Sorrow

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Winter 1862

 


My dearest Captain M.


I am sending this here letter in hope sir, in fear.
Hoping you will return then fearing you will not. The
babies are growing like field weeds when we skip a day
of chopping. Ya youngest up staggering like a new
born calf. Wondering if' n they remember you?
Went to church last Sunday only to find out
The parson done jump ship, headed north. I still
say he was a lily liver-ed fancy boy. Well we ladies
prayed together and sung Rock Of Ages...sounding
like bunch of broken- hearted angels.
Supper is pretty much the same thing; pinto beans
cornbread yams, roasted yard bird. If' n times get
any harder that lazy rooster you fetched at county
fair will look pretty good boiled in a pot. Dumplings
and all.
Just to have you here would surely erase all my
tears of sorrow. Lawd knows I misses you. But not
as much as you gonna miss your paw. Bless his heart
they found him dead over on Grange river just
below the cliff. Been thinking bout leaving
coming to you or my Maw's. Was told some soldiers
had wives nearby; but afraid of danger.
Young' uns needing they Paw too, I pray my
prayers are with you Captain.

waiting in Atlanta


Honey

Author notes

Title: Civil War veteran Joshua John Casey and his wife.
Artist: David C. Foster
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  • Rheea gold member
    February 25
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    Congratulations sweet one it is indeed perfect to me as Southern represented.


  • oceanbluize
    February 25

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    Whoa! This godly write is to be commended my dear poetess. Your personification of true southern living (hold on, still have to pick my jaw up) is nothing short of perfection. For I am confident there were many letters written with this speech pattern. Write as you speak. Due to your bold rebellious act against my strict rules regarding spelling and grammar, you have done what others have not so far, stepped outside the box, and truly put yourself into this person. For your bold efforts you shall be rewarded, and I accept this letter with all my heart can muster.
    Congratulations on this winner of a write!
    You've made it in that top three somewhere.

    Ok now I'm speechless

    Ocean


  • Peteskid gold member
    February 19

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    a war is a tragedy in so many ways and the people left behind suffer too, regardless of the side or the cause, one must consider the sufering of families and children as a firm reason never to war, and find our way to use sense rather than the senseless ways...excellent...PK


  • memoriesofyou
    February 15
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    well

    thats so sad. greatly written. Breaks my heart

  • twodie4
    February 15

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    What a beautiful letter of hope and love and life as it was then. You painted a wonderful picture with your words that I could clearly see within my mind, there was such a sense of longing.
    Excellent write
    All the best
    Emma


  • Draig aine gold member
    February 13
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    well done

    gripping I love the line ".sounding
    like bunch of broken- heated angels."


  • Rheea gold member
    February 10
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    This is so good, I felt it.


  • Jazzlyn
    February 7
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    Great

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