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Vital Principle

Equanimity reciprocates phantasm;
circadian cadence commensurate
to paramnesia or,
chicanery, as it may be.
Through the soul of the Spirit
truth is rectitude.
Whether proximity interminable,
potency is unitary.
The refulgent animates perdurable.

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  • Wolfdog silver member
    July 29

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    Superb

    A rather intriguing, enigmatic write with lot's of $.75 words. The kind of words I haven't had any use for in conversation, since college. None-the-less, a good write.


    • plainoljoe
      July 29
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      Clovis, on occassion I use terms such as these to play with minds and hopefully challange the reader to step farther outside the box. Complex words require complex thought to discover simplicity

      Joe

      • Wolfdog silver member
        July 30
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        I understand quite well, and I had forgotten my (lol).


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    April 13

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    great!

    you manage to get out a huge thought process in very few words...I can tell that I'm going to love reading more of your work...


    • plainoljoe
      April 13
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      Kendal , I use terms like these someitmes just to mess with peoples minds,,my little version of sick humor. Other times, like this, it seperates the thinkers from the psuedo- intellects

      Joe

  • Jason-R-Britt
    February 7
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    A+

    I love poems that make you think.

    • plainoljoe
      February 7
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      So Jason, in an im, tell me what it made you think about

      Joe


  • hawkeslake gold member
    February 7

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    Love all your great words! Made me pause and think how each went together with the next, and what each phrase meant -- hard work if one doesn't find great pleasure in unusual words! This is worth reading several times. Well-done!


    • plainoljoe
      February 7
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      Hawkes, thanks for your compliment! Sometimes simplicity allows the reader to miss the point of the message. When one has to think, the impact is greater

      Joe


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    February 6
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    Aww Joe your determined to keep me on my toes huh
    And yessss i got out the dictionary
    Good to see you back my friend


    • plainoljoe
      February 7
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      Deceits, see what happens when we spoke about word power. Using the correct and non-ambiguous terms, everyone learns and everyone thinks,

      love to you

      Joe


  • Lady Purple
    February 6

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    i like this it is short and simple but gets the point across and keeps the young mind such as mine wonder


    • plainoljoe
      February 6
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      Lady, glad I got the point the point across--now to get this theme practiced

      Joe

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    February 6

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    In all honesty joe you have lost me, I shall have to look a few of these words up, at present it speaks to me of overcoming, finding a balance, keeping the faith. Would be pleased if you could clarify when/if have time, am in the process of trying to do three things and a fourth would be too much multi tasking, hope you are well dear poet?


    • plainoljoe
      February 6
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      Yvette, you're not lost at all for you have it exactly correct. What and how one puts into their life is equal to what is reaped. At times we try to fool ourselves into thinking something isn't what it really is, but the truth is always there waiting to be heard. No matter how far or how near one might think the Light might be, it is always shine down with love and compassion

      Joe

  • Very well done. The use of these words show an extensive grasp of vocabulary. Nice to see your work featured again.

    Mike


    • plainoljoe
      February 6
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      Hey Mike, long time. My grasp comes from reaching into a Thesaurus to redefine my simple English. Sometimes you have to get lofty to get the point across.
      Thanks for dropping by,

      Joe


  • Tears of Roses
    February 6
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    you got your money's worth with those words
    Roses to you

    Teresa


  • rollingzen
    February 6
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    are you the famous 'Joe the Plummer' ?

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