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hearts and head

tonight the monsters crept out of the holes
and into our bed
with nothing to say only asking for a light
and to sped their death cloud
but we've lost the gas masks
who the hell would tell them no
who the fuck would touch us there
only the ones with dirt in their hair
and onions on their lips and breath
tonight the monsters crept out of the holes
and into our sheets
biting at my neck
biting at our hearts and head
just to find we're sharing air
and to see god doesn't care

would you touch me there?

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  • ApollosMuse
    February 19

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    wow...this gave me the chills...something is breathing down your neck right now huh!!whatever you have going on it's coming out great on "paper"!!!


  • L.Jay
    February 7
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    wow very beautiful