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Headlock

This flickering sketch of scenery
Floats away but a warm wind
Brings it all back again
Missing our great adventures
Your sex and condensation
I go outside & bring it all in
It’s now too late to start
Got my heart in a headlock
I don’t believe you or any other anymore
In know I’m better than this

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  • joshualee
    February 10

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    I like it. Emotion is good. I know sometimes it's hard to forget or let go when everything seems to remind you. Then you remember why you are where you are. Then letting go gets easier and easier. I don't know how close I am. Maybe it's just me.


  • Fibe Kill-DFW Punk-
    February 6
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    you are better, dont let any mother fucker tell you otherwise


  • Deathless1
    February 6

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    great emotion, one thing i cot was i think you need to put an A before, " headlock".
    but other then that great sort write.


  • Samantha Marie
    February 6

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    My dear, just let go. I know it's hard. really hard....
    But it can be done.
    I'll love you always <33
    *hugs*


    • HaileeDear
      February 6
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      oh ive let go, i was just thinking back, like damn, it was great while it lasted

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