Why oh why Oh baby
Why Oh Why oh why
Why oh why Oh baby
Baby don’t you make cry
I get up in the morning, like most married men
To put the bread and butter, on the table again
Come home from work early, my heart you rend
When I find you in bed, with my best friend
Why oh why Oh baby
Why Oh Why oh why
Why oh why Oh baby
Baby don’t you make cry
Built you a dream house, with beautiful things
A luxury car and a diamond ring
I ask for breakfast in the morning, supper at night
I come home from work, you’re no where in sight
Why oh why Oh baby
Why Oh Why oh why
Why oh why Oh baby
Baby don’t you make cry
I’m a simple kind of man and I don’t ask for much
All I wanted in the morning, was a gentle touch
But you sleep with the sun and rise with the moon
You’ll dance for the boys, when they play their tune
Why oh why Oh baby
Why Oh Why oh why
Why oh why Oh baby
Baby don’t you make cry
Yea you’re my moon light mama, you live for the street
When the sun goes down, you’re a bitch in heat
Put on this earth to walk the land
Sucking all the life from the boys in the band
Why oh why Oh baby
Why Oh Why oh why
Why oh why Oh baby
Baby don’t you make cry
The kids in crappy diapers and the house is a mess
Every day with you, just puts me to the test
One day they’ll find you lying, face down in the street
A stomach full of downers and a bottle at your feet
Why oh why Oh baby
Why Oh Why oh why
Why oh why Oh baby
Baby don’t you make cry
Why oh why Oh baby
Why Oh Why oh why
Why oh why Oh baby
Baby don’t you make me
Baby don’t you make me
Baby don’t you make me
Make me cry
Author notes
This is a Rock and Roll Blues Song
Written about some idiot who married a groopie
Feb 6 11:22 AM
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I really like the form you wrote this in.thanks for entering. -
wow this was crazy in a Awesome way..
I can't stand cheaters, sluts. >.<
Wow hope this is not a personal write if it is I'm sorry
I honestly think if someone cheated on me I would kill them
Great write and thanks so much for entering my contest Good luck -♥Amy♥
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AH...THE MOONLIGHT MAMA'S OF THE WORLD. I LOVE'EM AS LONG AS I'M NOT MARRIED TO THEM. GOOD JOB AGAIN PUTTING THE BLUES RYTHEM INTO WORDS.
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Why oh why Oh baby
Why Oh Why oh why
Love the way you mixed the wording to pause in different sections. This makes for a very good emotional song. That last verse! whew!! I can see it plain as day! Now, aint that the way it always goes in the blues!!
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Very Good Buddy
My wife is either in bed,or eating if not shes in bed eating
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Cool write. I'd love to hear this put to music! Way to go! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!
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This is EXACTLY the kind of thing I want!
You really understood me when I said I wanted the physical!
I loved it. It's so true! Even though I've never even thought about marriage, I FEEL YOUR PAIN!!!
Cleanup: Although I loved your physical, I could have used a bit more of the medaphorical. You sounded a bit scared when you put in the medophorical. You have it going good! Don't hesitate, LIVE DAMMIT LIVE!!!
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wow, my first song! kinda reminded me of a Dr Hook song and also a little bit of Chris Isaaks "Baby did a bad bad thing". The girl sounds like a proper nightmare too, poor "idiot" who tried to marry someone who was married to a band. nice steady rhyme and feeling of resignment. good luck in the contest
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