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Euphemism

Like the moon surrenders the day to the sun,
Like legs losing their will to run,
and the ocean's roar, mute in deaf ears;
almost silent as heartache and moreso than tears.

Like the face of an hour, hands ticking away,
Like using paint with no color- black, white, and gray-
and losing something you were forever to keep;
longing to wake the deepest kind of sleep.

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  • riobravo1
    February 6
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    dark as hell
    but really well written

    Thanks for your enthusiastic comment by the way