You look into my eyes as if you know,
I can see your opinions were made.
In silence undressing me with those eyes,
just accepting I am the foe.
The truth I cannot tell you,
or rather the truth you cannot bare.
So go ahead and look deep within,
you shall perish in my glare.
Tonight at midnight is when I feast,
on children, mothers and men.
I urge you to make haste and leave,
for I truly am the beast.
Humans constanly play with my mood,
my urges i just cannot control.
I am the ring master of this circus,
and you are merely my food.
So come my children of the night,
come closer if you dare.
I'll devour you all-flesh, bones
and laugh as your spirit takes flight.
A contest entry
- Show me your best horror side by Short but cute.
1050 points, ended March 16, 2009, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show us how odd you are! by Noir mariposa...x.
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Comments
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Very interesting scary


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Really interesting actually.
You capture the intesity of the situation and the importance that if that person stays around he/she is dead.
Great job and great description!!!
Loved it!!!
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spooky read...you've got me lookin over my shoulder...
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very dark
I like all types of poetry
I think you have talent in this area, and enjoyed reading this
keep up the wonderful poems, and welcome to ap
~Marla~


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Your words reveal very promising skills, even if you've just joined this site. I'm one to release my emotions in my poetry as well...welcome =]
Hey-- I'm gonna favorite you just for the hell of it.
Great poem, by the way. I loved the first verse.

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The truth I cannot tell you,
or rather the truth you cannot bare.
So go ahead and look deep within,
you shall perish in my glare."
amazing
you are a great writer

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