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Caritas

You look into my eyes as if you know,
I can see your opinions were made.
In silence undressing me with those eyes,
just accepting I am the foe.


The truth I cannot tell you,
or rather the truth you cannot bare.
So go ahead and look deep within,
you shall perish in my glare.


Tonight at midnight is when I feast,
on children, mothers and men.
I urge you to make haste and leave,
for I truly am the beast.


Humans constanly play with my mood,
my urges i just cannot control.
I am the ring master of this circus,
and you are merely my food.


So come my children of the night,
come closer if you dare.
I'll devour you all-flesh, bones
and laugh as your spirit takes flight.

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  • Short but cute
    March 16, 2009
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    Very interesting scary


  • Keirii
    March 5, 2009

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    Really interesting actually.
    You capture the intesity of the situation and the importance that if that person stays around he/she is dead.

    Great job and great description!!!

    Loved it!!!


  • Nangaleema
    February 26, 2009
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    spooky read...you've got me lookin over my shoulder...


  • Chunky Monkee
    February 17, 2009

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    very dark I like all types of poetry I think you have talent in this area, and enjoyed reading this keep up the wonderful poems, and welcome to ap ~Marla~


  • Nienna Calmcacil
    February 6, 2009

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    Your words reveal very promising skills, even if you've just joined this site. I'm one to release my emotions in my poetry as well...welcome =]

    Hey-- I'm gonna favorite you just for the hell of it.

    Great poem, by the way. I loved the first verse.


  • new light
    February 6, 2009

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    The truth I cannot tell you,
    or rather the truth you cannot bare.
    So go ahead and look deep within,
    you shall perish in my glare."

    amazing
    you are a great writer

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