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anonymous witness

I fit
nowhere
yet manage to move freely
everywhere
stroll past sleepwalkers
never making direct eye contact
never disturbing their dreams
forgotten stranger
shadow of a ghost
vanishing other
anonymous

slipping away
always slipping away
seeking
finding
poetic solitude
where I witness the great emptiness 
comedy without laughter
tragedy without tears
absurdity without end

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  • Thewordflow
    November 12
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    Amazing, flows so well and the inspiration is outstanding, kudos indeed XD


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    March 20
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    Great!!. This flows very well from start to finish. The imagery is superb. I am a little cranky over this AIG fiasco so my favorite lines were:

    nausea! nausea!
    politicians of all stripes hustle their wares
    armies in armani spit and swear

    Great job.

    Mike


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    March 14

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    Reads like a "stream of consciousness" piece... a great collage of politically pointed imagery spoken with eclectic force. The Nietzsche-esque ending speaks well to me.


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    February 7
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    Oh, yeah.

    I can hear your voice.
    This is amazing work.