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As a child,

thou must learn to walk ~

for thou must

meet thy enemy steadfast,

nay retreat,

but standing firm.

 

 

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Prompt: http://marleyvangrinsven.deviantart.com/art/Who-yhe-shoe-fits-111764817
20 words exactly

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  • Kuranya gold member
    February 21, 2009

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    I love this, it is perfect for the prompt and a great lesson for children to boot (pardon the pun, it was intended) Best to you in the contest


  • Soft-Rain gold member
    February 9, 2009
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    I loved this...Stand firm!
    It suits the pic so well.


    ~lisa~


  • maralisa silver member
    February 6, 2009
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    haha a great take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa