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Powerless Me

Plastered mouth
Can’t allow my tongue
To speak for my life

Tied up hands
Can’t help themselves
Being so silent

Very much scared
Two eyes are there
But how can they scream
Or unfold the knots?

My mind is free
But only can think, and
What can be done?

Wanted to know
If God is Free
To help me out

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  • spiritualangel
    February 24
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    Beautiful. Well done. Best of luck.

  • Rambunctious
    February 8

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    Indeed... Prayer works and prayers can be said through the church of the mind, though faith in the self has to be there before one is totally free.
    There is a strong philosophical strength within your work and one is forced to stop, re-read and think...
    I like your mind and the way you write...
    Ever-write, Poetess...

    Ron.