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Never Coming Back

I miss your smile
I miss your hugs
I miss your laugh
I miss your kisses

Two years together
I miss those times
You were the first girl
That I ever fell for

The day you left
How you left
It crushed me
And still does

I wish you hadn't left
I would of done anything for you
I wish you would of talked to me
I would of helped you

I love you my angel
And I will never forget
The times we had together
Forever in my heart

Author notes

This is about my girlfriend that committed suicide by shooting herself. I love you and miss you! I'm bi, but this was the first girl that I had a serious relationship with and no one else mattered to me when we were together...
I chose this background because she loves butterflies...

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    June 22

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    I know how much love you hold in your heart for a person and I truly know how this is painful for you even today. It's just so hard when you lose someone, even more so when they couldn't reach out for help. I just want to you so much right now. Please know that I'm here for you, but I think you already know that. I want to thank you for your entry into the following contest: "Already On My Favorites."

    Ted E

    PS: Your entry has been blessed by the three wise clappers, but don't spend the whole nine points in one place(lol)!


  • hyper thing
    February 20
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    I loved it and yet i am so so so sorry that this happened to you


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    February 7

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    Y'know, I like the way you said that she "loves" butterflies in your notes - that's written as though she was still here, and it's touching. It's a sad story; as someone who is prone to thoughts of putting the world behind me, one thing that keeps me going is how much certain people would miss me.


    • Broken-Rickie
      February 7
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      To me, she is still here. She'll never be completely gone...Thank you for your comment

  • Sun-shiney
    February 6

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    wow im sorry. * crying hard* im im just so upset that what if i get to that point again ang i do that to my boyfriend. im just so scard. i don't want him to hurt but when he moved i can't excape the pain that he trys to keep my mind off of.


    • Broken-Rickie
      February 6
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      I've been suicidal and you just have to stay strong and talk to people. Surround yourself around those that know you and can help you maintain a good balance. If you ever want to talk to someone, I'm always free...


  • Frances Nightengale
    February 6

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    I love and can relate to this. This is very heart-felt. You did a great job. The only thing i'll say critically though is in the 4th stanza, first line, it should probably be "hadn't left". Grammar-wise that would bo correct. Thanks for submitting!

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