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Friend

I wish I could be the one to make you giddy

And giggle

 

But really?

What am I to you?

 

Just a friend

Always a friend

 

Never anything more

Sometimes something less

 

How I dream about you

Wish for you

 

To hold you

Kiss you

 

If only

I could make you see

 

But you are blind...

For another

 

So here's to waiting

And hoping the second mouse gets the cheese.

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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    September 29

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    OMG this is awesome....I love the simplicity...the way the emotion weaves so beautifully throughout
    I love how its tender and whistful but still up tempo...you are talented my friend
    T


  • StarrieNacht
    February 21

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    Thought provoking as usual.
    May your waiting end and you find your sought out happiness.
    Dreams are dreams, you"ll awake from your deep slumber finding what your heart searches for...

    may you find lots of pennies


  • Alittle2lost
    February 6

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    This is really good. Haven't seen anything from you in a long time, but, well worth the wait, as usual
    I really like it, a lot. it's sad, and painful, but.. hopefull. I think we've all felt like that at some point, and you capture it beautifully. Well penned. Bravo.