...of dreams tender and soft
woven as the most delicate silk fiber
enveloping my skin.
Please, unwrap me slowly
with touches of your fingers,
passionate like a moonless night.
Lead me to the path of light,
I go with you, only,
while your lips whisper me secrets
of corridors where dark walls
and white shadows fall,
where our childish laughter
and garden bushes blossom
in the fresh-color of white lilac.
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a lovely take on the prompt. Thank you so much for entering. Love, Lane
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Very nice Sonja
I like your line "Please, unwrap me slowly" as it pulls the reader into the poem. As always so romantic.
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this is absolutely beautiful - very soft, dreamy & dreamlike, yes, i hate 'waking up' from these 'live' dreams too,
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"Please, unwrap me slowly..." - beautiful - there is poetry in the "unwrapping" and you know how to write it!
~ Nicolette
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The beauty of the sentiments and magic of the flow reveals it wonder..well done.. the
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a very expert write very flowing in senses that make us feel what you say, a soft seduction to it i feel anything more would waver from your innocent and cool spirit, beautiful words and love the natures tones
abigail
formerly
heart on sleeve
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this is very seductive, its sultry undertones tempting me to look behind the blinds, lovley flow and simpleness also that i often see in your words no matter the subject this pure innocence comes filtering through
well done
white
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