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Lust is the devils love

Feminine curves flow so very exquisite
A lower back and where it leads to like
The begining of an upside down question mark

The upside down answer is easy
And the upside down question
Is hard

Very hard.

And inanimate turns to intriguing
when there are important questions involved

Intrigue turns to enchantment
When the lighting is just right

Enchantment turns to lust
When animal instinct is invoked

And lust leads to

SweatDripping
LoveMaking
PrimalSex

Fucking like death himself was knocking on the door loudly and the only way to keep him out was to come like your lives depended on it and force him to run for his life scared out of his mind of the groans and screams coming from within the room

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  • darkyinsoul
    April 21
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    wow sounds a little devilish.
    Loved the inagery


  • Heroesrox
    February 26
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    Awesome piece! Thanks so much for a brilliant share!

  • silverfish
    February 8
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    i like the sounds coming from behind this poem. congrats on your tropy. -silverfish

  • tara wilson gold member
    February 8

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    i agree with Lane, you have a very unique voice and different style, sometimes, i think we get so used to reading the same thing, same 'styles' -- so this is refreshing. well done, congrats on the bronze.


  • IronMaiden1236
    February 8
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    Freaking AAA!!!


  • Dalaney gold member
    February 8

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    You're staying true to your voice in poetry, and because of it, you continuously have me wanting more. MORE. Love, Lane

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