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Take me away

Wake me up.
This dream is becoming a nightmare, a scar of which to bear_
So many countless times have I been told of a better place to live_
An interesting school, an escape from my emotional torments, another chance to start anew once more_

I walk alone.
How many times must I abide and yearn for this escape?_
Days turn to weeks, weeks to months and so on, yet still we are here_
Why must I endure so much suffering?


The torments.
Everywhere I turn to there is no escaping this_
At home he discourages us, I yell at him and fight back_
Everyday seems to get more worse for me, new problems arise, old ones turn about...there is no escaping_


Take my hand and guide me.
Your belated promises, my ceasing hopes, his empty words..._
My heart can't take much more, I am lost and becoming increasingly numb by the day_
I want to get away and breathe fresh air and leave behind my shell_


Angry and lost.
All this violence, the yelling, discouraging comments, empty meanings, careless feelings and more..._
I've had plenty more than my fill of struggle and pain, more and more am I lost to you and forever lost to him_
Take me away already, help me heal my wounds and yours_

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A friend of mine is going through probably the worst part of her life yet, and I believe she has given up everything but wants to believe life will turn around for her troubled self.

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  • Together forever
    February 20
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    this one is really awesome! but really depressing...i like it!


  • Nickey Mouse
    February 6
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    Wow.Well just be there for her.And tell her sometimes life gets worse before it gets better.