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We Are

I want to feel your arms,
surround my body.
I want your lips
to caress mine.

Hands intertwined,

I want my eyes,
to gaze into yours
as I drift into slumber.
And as my eyes flutter open.

Our hearts should beat as.

I want to feel you
surround me always.
Never wants to let you go.
Please just stay here.

Laugh,

Smile,

Love me,

Taste me,

Hug me,

Feel me,

Want me,

Show me,

Feel as I feel.
See as I see.
Become me as I become you.
We are one,
We are love.





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  • Chaos12
    February 6

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    Ah, I remember this need quite well. That desire to the your partner love you with the same depth that you have for them. It is a lovely poem you wrote.