Keep bleeding with the thoughts of heartbreak.
I may miss you, but I'm going to move on.
Why do you pop in my mind out of the blue?
I am strong to push you away, but I know I still love you.
You are the second person I fell in love with,
And hun, it's time for me to realize that you
Will have a part in my heart, but the past is the past.
I need to leave the feeling of heartbreak,
because I know where this will lead to.
You will change to someone you wanted to be,
and I will change to be who I am.
We won't met each other for a long time,
but in your heart I'm still there and always will be.
I asked to be friends, but I was dumb knowing
that you would say no, and it was too fast to ask that question.
I didn't want to lose you,
Silly me hurting but wanting to save myself from pain.
Now, it's time to put the past to the past,
and create a new journey.
I will always cherish the memories.
Good-bye to you.
My second love.
Author notes
It's deep. I wanted to write, so here you go. Maybe not good grammar, sorry, but my emotion right now doesn't care.
Love it or Dislike. Up to you!
Thank you for reading!! =] Comment if wanted. xx
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hey this is so sad. im sorry that this person isnt in your life. they seemed to really special to you. your so strong and you will get over this and meet a new love. your talent has grown so much. im sorry its taken me so long..
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I really like this. I can also relate to it.
I'm sorry you lost that person.
If you ever need to talk just message me b/c I know what ur going through.
Great job
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If it helps, you will never let go the ones you truly loved - and they will always be with you. In years to come, on days when your heart feels cold, remembering positive moments may make you glow inside. Just let the heartbreak slip away.
Kezz
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This is a very truthful portray of reality, and I like that a lot. I really like your wording and the simple way you created this piece, still giving it such a depth it surely will touch a lot of people. That's a great asset and you should hold on to that. Marvelous job, definately.
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the write portrays the reality of a difficult decision ... the decision is not clear cut and the concern about " good grammar " is unfounded. " good grammar " is clean and the way this piece is written, gives it that uncertainty.
thanks.
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nice write.. i got your feelings towards this individual and emotion, it reads well mate,
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Awe... A very moving emotional piece.
deep and profound. Well done here and congrats on POD
Delila
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this is good. I have these same feelings with my second love as well....but the grammer wasnt that bad
so high five and have an apple =]
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This is similar to what I feel about my first love... wow It's funny how you can be thinking about something like flying a kite and then, all of a sudden, the thoughts just attack you like a heavy rain. It takes so much energy to push those thpughts and memories away, and sometimes you wonder if you will ever be able to move on.
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Wow amazing!
Im speechless...I can also relate to this very well, you are a great writer, Keep writing
Tash.
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oohh!!!!!!! I LOVED THIS! this is like..i don't even have words for it, but for sure amazing, it's like beyond amazing your a freaken great writer!!!!!!
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A splendid write and a real pleasure to read !
I know on the 12th line down you meant - meet.
Other than that , i love it ! Start to finish !!
Best wishes !!
Friend Easy
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Very deep and sad words!
I really enjoyed reading this one.
Thanks a lot for sharing it here
and keep up the wonderful work!
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Love it. true emotion, and exactly what im going through.
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Aww this is a strong write with powerful emotion behind every word. I think a lot of people can relate to this, myself included. Bravo!
♥ Kathraina
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