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Wtf

Lies are all
That have been laid
Between today and
Yesteryear

You ask as if you need to
Wtf

OMG
Is the end
Near

I think not
But who knows or cares

I do not
For I live my life as I wish
Do you
Do I really
Who knows or cares
About this contest
Of the one called life
Do you
Do I
I think not
Well I ask why I would be here

A contest entry

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  • etoile
    February 13

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    this is an interesting poem. i would've like something with more imagery and emotion, but otherwise this was alright.

    thanks for entering and goodluck