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Holding Onto Yesterday, I Am Still So Lost In Love With You-Acrostic Poem

 

 

 

Honesty and understanding had always kept us together

Opening the gates of our hearts as we slowly

Learned to trust and accept each other for who we were

Deep in my soul I always knew you were the one for me

I always hoped that in the end we would be together

Never in a million years did I ever think we would be so far apart

Give me one more chance to prove my love to you

 

Of all the women that I have ever known in my life

No other love has ever been so pure and true

Time and chance brought us together one summer afternoon

Over a cup of coffee and a turkey sandwich we talked

 

Your beautiful brown eyes captivated me the entire time

Every word that you said still lingers within my heart

So soft and smooth were your tiny hands in mine

Timid yet eager to make conversation, you politely asked

Each question wholeheartedly with a smile

Reaching out I touched your face as I answered you

Dreams and goals along with current plans were discussed

As we slowly got to know one another

You were always such a great person to spend time with

 

I miss that so much and wonder if someday we could talk again

 

All of my life I have tried to block you out of my mind

Maybe I am not as strong as I claim to be

 

So many nights I lie awake and alone wondering where you are

Trying to find the right words to bring you back to me

I know that I don't deserve you and I'm not asking for your sympathy

Letting you go was the worst thing that I have ever done

Leaving you lost in a world of uncertainty and endless fear

 

Still you remained strong and moved on without me

Oh, I am so lost without the warmth of your embrace

 

Losing you has changed me in so many ways

Only with you did I ever feel complete and alive

Stories of our past come to mind as I sit and reminisce

Tears of sadness cascade down my face knowing that I was wrong

 

I should have been there for you when you needed me

Not once did you complain, you were always so understanding 

 

Love is something that you always believed in and fought for

Once in a lifetime was the love that we shared together and you always made

Various attempts to mend our relationship and keep us strong

Eventually it wore you down and by then it was too late

 

With all of the goals we set and the love we shared

I never thought that I would ever lose you like I did

To be with you I would sacrifice everything that I own 

Holding onto yesterday, I am still so lost in love with you

 

You will always hold a place in my heart

Only with you did I ever feel content and free

Understanding and admitting my faults, I apologize

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

"Don't Forget To Breath"

For Pretty Disaster's Contest: I once based a poem off of the title of this one and thought that it would be great to turn it into an Acrostic Poem. I am really proud of it and am glad that I decided to do so. Thanks a lot for reading and holding this contest!


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  • This is a long acrostic for sure but so very well written. You word usage is very good. Also I like your imagery. You did well. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering this into my contest.

  • This sounds like a relationship I was just in. I fought so hard to keep us together and in the end, it didn't work. I still talk to him. Afraid that one day he will regret the choices he made to shut me out. I still am fighting I guess. Just to keep us friends. Wonderful write thank you for entering my contest.


  • AraLupus
    March 25

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    This is the first acrostic poem I've read, and I actually quite enjoyed it. I loved the way it was like you took us on a journey of the relationship. From "Time and chance brought us together one summer afternoon
    Over a cup of coffee and a turkey sandwich we talked" which was the beginging of the relationship to "Losing you has changed me in so many ways
    Only with you did I ever feel complete and alive
    Stories of our past come to mind as I sit and reminisce
    Tears of sadness cascade down my face knowing that I was wrong" the break up and the feelings of despair as you wish you could have them back...
    "To be with you I would sacrifice everything that I own
    Holding onto yesterday, I am still so lost in love with you" ... I could really feel it.

    Well done and thanks for the entry. Good luck in the contest!

  • "With all of the goals we set and the love we shared
    I never thought that I would ever lose you like I did
    To be with you I would sacrifice everything that I own
    Holding onto yesterday, I am still so lost in love with you"

    Very nicely written, I really enjoyed reading this.

    ~~KitKat


  • honey bear
    March 10

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    an exelent write, but i would expect nothing less from such a talent as yours i did not realise that this was an acrosstic as i was so absorbed in reading and although i read it through twice (yes it is that good ) it was only when i read your notes that i realsised and had yet another peek, exelent work as always


  • Poetryistherapy
    February 25

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    What an incredible piece of poetry..... I was captivated from beginning to end.... and I must say you took an ordinary acrostic and made it absolutely fantastic..... My favorite lines were:
    "You will always hold a place in my heart

    Only with you did I ever feel content and free

    Understanding and admitting my faults, I apologize"

    and simply because I can relate to them so well..... Wonderful job.


  • Arkbear gold member
    February 24
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    Gorgeous penning here Bro......you have a heart that holds more than most......another gift from God -

     

    You are oneof the few Poets who can keep me reading lengthy writes....you are gifted....neevr stop writing.....you would disappoint so mnay Poets....God bless you & thank you for sharing this with the Group,

     

    Bear ~


  • Dragonbabyx3
    February 21
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    I forgot I read this one, but its worth reading a few times! Great write hun!


  • Lady Michaella
    February 19

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    wow.... i don't usually go for this type of poem.. but i must say.. i'm very touched by it..it could use a bit of language technique in it.. but this is just amazing as it is

    Thanks for entering.. and best of luck in my contest!
    ~~Lemon Bee~~


  • motel silver member
    February 19

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    there are so many strands in this write ... there is sweetness, regret, hope, joy of experiencing love ...
    it's really lovely and touching.
    thanks.


  • ModernDionysis
    February 18

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    This is very heartfelt and sincere, and entirely believable. You can enter your state of mind and heart as you read it.


  • Pretty Disaster
    February 18
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    This a beautiful piece in its self but the fact that you could make it an Acrostic also is amazing. Great job in expressing what it's like to lose someone who meant the world to you, the emotion you shared is very easy to relate to. Thank you for entering and good look in the contest.
    --Pretty Disaster


  • YesterdaysDreams
    February 18

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    With all of the goals we set and the love we shared

    I never thought that I would ever lose you like I did

    To be with you I would sacrifice everything that I own

    Holding onto yesterday, I am still so lost in love with you


    this is quite stunning, very sad and hertfelt. Beautiful. Good job and good luck in the contest.


  • Denierim
    February 18

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    That's so sad yet beautiful. I just love the way you can tell a story filled with emotions like this, showing exactly the feelings inside a human heart. A very well penned poem; can't help but love it. ^_^

  • x26ss
    February 17

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    This is the best acrostic I have read in memory here on AP, hands down. I want to first say thank you, this must have taken tremendous effort. The end piece is a shining example of that.
    BRAVO


  • Re-invention silver member
    February 17

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    wow.... truly beautiful I don't have the minimum idea who you made this long acrostic so beautiful but I supposed you were inspired... I loved this very well done!


  • midnightnursex
    February 16

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    OH MY JESUS! I LOVE LOVE LOVE HOW EACH FIRST LETTER OF EVERY LINE SPELLS OUT THE TITLE. YOU ARE A FRIGGIN GENIUS MAN! OH MY GOSH AHHHHH THAT'S AMAZING AHHHH ILU CAPS LOCK AHHHH IM SO SUPRISED AHHH.


  • JadedSparrow
    February 16

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    Outstanding is the first word that comes to mind. The truth behind the raw emotion driving this piece is one that I have also had to endure. This was eloquently penned. Bravo.

    JadedSparrow


  • Kathraina gold member
    February 15

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    OMG this is sooo beautiful!
    Absolutely fantastic job,
    this has truly touched my heart!
    Thank you for entering!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Perfect Asymmetry
    February 15
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    It's simply beautiful!
    Nela


  • ChemicalArtemis
    February 10
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    This came out beautifully. I was amazed. I never got a poem like this


  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 8

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    This is wonderful and another acrostic LOL!! I loved reading this hon great job and good luck

  • this is soooooo wonderfully well done that i am spending the points to applaud your work. as i am trying to earn 18,000 points that says a lot about what i think of this beautiful piece of work. thank you for sharing with me today and i wish you the best of luck in this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie


  • twiztidXxXbeauty
    February 6
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    this is beautiful...i love it!


  • Arizona Sunset
    February 6

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    A once in a lifetime love make up that wonderful thing called romance...never regret sweet brother, as life is about learning and understanding...everything happens for a reason, it has its time place and season...memories are yesterday, make new ones today always hold fast to the way she made you feel, for it was that love that made you the man you are today...and in my book...that helped make you pretty special ...blessings always~ Trisha~


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 6

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    oh man..

    so powerful and full of longing for a love lost..jeez it's both sad and wonderful that you had someone touch your soul like that my friend..hey at least you can say.."i know i have a heart because it hurts losing you" right?


  • pain5756
    February 6
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    awwwwww i love this poem its so sweet haha

  • a.childers
    February 6

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    My first impression was that the background didn't fit lol but then I decided it did! This is a very good poem, its so heart felt and you seem to have a lot of feelings for her! I love your work! You're a great writer! <3 A.Childers


  • liltulip gold member
    February 6
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    wow!

    ive never seen such an extensive acrostic! i feel your emotions in this as well!!!


  • Dragonbabyx3
    February 6

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    This is such a beautiful acrostic! I really enjoyed reading this..... *wishes someone wrote something like this for her* Beautiful job!


  • Nanette
    February 6

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    Oh wow! This is a truly remarkable piece. Dripping with heartfelt emotions. My heart have a slight ache now...I somehow resonate with this. Loosing the love of your life or being seperated, there is no pain that compares to this. This is so beautifully written. Thank you for sharing your emotions like this. Absolutely Amazing!!!! I wish you all the very best!!!!

  • This is such a beautiful piece ... I regret there may not be a great comment here - this one got to me a little too much lol. Very sad, and pained in that essence of longing - and "what-if's"... I really loved this hun... Very touching!!!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 5

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    This is beautiful, when you linked it I was waiting to see the erotic but this...is priceless. Thank you for sending this one to me.

    Love
    Passions

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