Looking up at you, I stare into those
Big doe brown eyes, and melt inside
Your mouth sits still, not moving
But your soul speaks loud and clear
Your gentle touch lights a fire deep
Inside of me and I search for true
Meaning in my want for you even
When you say I don't want you
Words go unspoken between us
Distance grows in leaps and bounds
Broken promises go unseen as we
Play along with the unforgiving silence
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SIilence
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powerful
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how sad.
the poem is really good though
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How heartbreaking. Sometimes I wonder if this is only your creative muse speaking, or if you are truly unhappy with your life. It concerns me, Kahy, I hope you are okay. Just know that there are people out there who care, even if they're in the background most of the time.
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hey honey. this is not my creative flow this is how i feel and unfortunately it isnt going to change much right now. i had a guy rip me from one end to another and im not sure where i am anymore. -
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I'm sorry, hon'. Heartbreak isn't an easy thing to move on from...and you're probably going to feel lost for a long time...but it won't always feel this way.
Just know that I am thinking of you and that I am here if you ever need anything.
I care about you, Kahy. I always have. I'm sorry if I don't always show you that.
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