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Beyond Reach!

Mighty Creator’s intelligence
  reflects beyond beauty,
    keeps us always safer, and
            preaches a big lesson -


Find your Limited Limits!


He is everything
  Try not to beat Him,
            but reach Him

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  • AngelKat42
    February 6, 2009

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    I love this poem that you've written. Incredible job. I love the last stanza the most.

    good luck
    kat


  • jcat gold member
    February 6, 2009

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    What an incredible message you have penned!! I love that last stanza, so much truth held in those words! Wonderful job!


  • goingnowherefast
    February 5, 2009
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    loved this is amazing


  • thejollytinker
    February 5, 2009

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    Yeah, it's not a race. He is, and that's final!
    Just asking though, did you mean 'your' limited limits, rather than 'you?'
    Takes nothing away from the meaning- G


    • Kiddy
      February 5, 2009
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      Aww..thanks for YOUR time... I was busy choosing background and didn't give a second visit to edit the poem... Thanks again...

      Love and regards
      Kiddy


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 5, 2009

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    Excellent take and such a strong message in this piece.
    Well done here and best of luck in the contest.


    Delila

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