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it was all you.....

you are gone its been over 2 monthes now
your picture by my bed thoughts of you inside my head
there is nothing that i can do
i cannot even talk to you. only in my heart
and in my head. this empty feeling that nothing can change
or fill. i loved you with my life.
i reach for you in the middle of the night
i stare at your picture and i wish it were not true
i miss you and yet there is nothing i can do.
it was your time or so they say.
now i am alone without you trying to get through
each day.
its an uphill battle this i must say.
i wander inside my home searching for and answer
searching for a meaning
trying not to complain
i miss you and there is nothing i can do
so here i am surrounded by my dreams and the future
that will never be
why did cancer steal you away from me
you are and always will be the love of my life
please watch over me
help me to see past the loneliness and strife
i know and feel you are near
even though you are not here
guild me to a brighter place
i want to feel happy one day
and walk with a smile on my face
i want our memories
the ones that belong only
to you and i
you were my dream
you helped me to fly
now i must walk alone
find my heart again
and a home
it was all about you

 

you know this was true......

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its been a little over two months since my lover died
i miss him. he loved it when i wrote.this is for him

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  • jessXbean
    February 6

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    this is really sweet and sad.
    im so sorry for your loss.
    you put yourself out there on this..
    and delivered your emotions really well.
    great poem.


  • Angelflower
    February 6
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    oh this was so heartfelt and touching.. made me tear up.. To love someone and then lose them, truly something that feels like hell on most days.. Such a painful and yet beautifully expressed write.. I am sure you are going through such a hard time right now.. I truly wish you a moments peace in memories one day.. Thank you very much for sharing

    Angel

  • Kazuki
    February 6

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    Passionate

    Your words have flowed into my mind and matched what is in my heart. I know what type of pain you're feeling. I could never assume to know particularly how you feel it, but that very pain consumes me every day. I'm so sorry for your loss. I hope the world sees fit to bring you happiness in the future.

    As long as you live every day just to live... his memory, and your love, will endure for all time.


  • queenie
    February 5
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    this is heavy. your emotions are so expressed in this, i have tears in my eyes. these aren't just words, these are words from the heart of you. i want to take away your pain because in penning this you made me feel your pain. the words flow with the emotions. hold on to thode wonderful memories.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 5

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    wonderful

    It is always hard to loose someone you love, to illnesses such as cancer. It is even harder being your mate. Vert nice flow of words very sad . A lot of feelings.


  • tomisb
    February 5

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    What could of been is and empty way to remember the one who was like your second skin. It is hard not to do when the love you felt was so true. So it is not to cast blame or make you wrong. Just, to point out, there is a better song. You know the love he felt and how he would want you to be all the best and wonderful things he knew you to be. He knew the strength of your heart and how you could be light into a room with a smile and make him want to be part of any little thing that caught your sensibitlities. So stand tall, cause you were loved by the best of them all. Be everything you know you can be and give your strength where you know the need and be the difference you always could be. Do it for you and do it in memory of him and you will bring to the world that wonderful thing that let you feel so alive.
    Love,
    Tom B.


  • Eeyore
    February 5

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    Fantastic!

    That was amazing! So Sad! i wouldn't change anything in my opinion. I almost cried. you're really talented


  • Free - Spirit
    February 5
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    It made me want to cry - good way

    I am so sorry. Poem was excellent. Great intense feelings

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