With no models, moulds, patterns
and no objective,
project ended successfully -
How?
Unanswered question!
Endlessly I wonder
every time I see
the fairies flying across
How beautiful they are!
Who is the creator?
Lunatic artist he must be
just spilled the paints
aimlessly on the wings
of the fragile angels
the tints are bright,
vibrant and kaleidoscopic,
lure the eyes of everyone
and, yes -
It is a
brilliant Modern art
painted by the Immoral Hands
of the Him!
- Kiddy
On Butterflies
O5 Feb 2009
Author notes
- On Butterflies
05 Feb 2009
- Chocolate eating peg leg pirates group list • next in list
A contest entry
- Best February Prewrites from These Dates: by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended March 2, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Group Contest for Friends of Trekkergirl only by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended March 3, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
:)
Comments
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Oh, our dear Kiddy, I hope you are feeling a wee bit better at least.


Love your poem and love YOU!
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A lovely poem, a delight to read.
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Truly said and beautifully written!
So darling... a happy poem!


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ahhh this is sooo cute... I like the butterflies and how God just created them by spilling paint on angels wings... very creative. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Explicite imagery of how a butterfly got it's colors, nice work. Blessings

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Lunatic artist he must be
just spilled the paints
aimlessly on the wings
of the fragile angels
Love the imagery of that stanza. The whole poem oozes with tended spirituality. Nicely done! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!
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Ah..you have nicely and universally depicted the beauty of HIS grace through the wonderful poetic expression..very well done my friend...
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