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Aimless Art by HIM!

With no models, moulds, patterns
    and no objective,
        project ended successfully -

How?
  Unanswered question!

Endlessly I wonder
    every time I see
            the fairies flying across

How beautiful they are!
    Who is the creator?

Lunatic artist he must be
  just spilled the paints
        aimlessly on the wings
              of the fragile angels

the tints are bright,
  vibrant and kaleidoscopic,
      lure the eyes of everyone


and, yes -
It is a
  brilliant Modern art
    painted by the Immoral Hands
      of the Him!







- Kiddy
  On Butterflies
  O5 Feb 2009

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- On Butterflies
05 Feb 2009

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  • Melodies
    May 5
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    Oh, our dear Kiddy, I hope you are feeling a wee bit better at least. Love your poem and love YOU!

  • Thor-201
    March 31
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    A lovely poem, a delight to read.


  • Melodies
    March 15

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    Truly said and beautifully written! So darling... a happy poem!


  • trekkergirl
    March 3

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    ahhh this is sooo cute... I like the butterflies and how God just created them by spilling paint on angels wings... very creative. Thanks for sharing this with us.


  • Denerica
    February 17
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    Explicite imagery of how a butterfly got it's colors, nice work. Blessings


  • Paloszoo gold member
    February 17
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    Lunatic artist he must be
    just spilled the paints
    aimlessly on the wings
    of the fragile angels


    Love the imagery of that stanza. The whole poem oozes with tended spirituality. Nicely done! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!

  • Ah..you have nicely and universally depicted the beauty of HIS grace through the wonderful poetic expression..very well done my friend...

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