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Moments

There are moments in your life that make you
And set the course of who you’re going to be
Sometimes they’re little,
Subtle moments
Sometimes they’re big moments
That you never saw coming

No one asks for their life to change
But it does
It’s what you do afterwards that counts
That’s when you find out who you are

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 1

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    This is very good

    One must always know as you guide yourself through this life you always strive to to and be the best you can .Know mistakjes will be made but we learn from them and become stronger and wiser through time

    • Xx-Erin-xX
      March 1
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      Thank you for reading and I also appreciate the comment and the applause. I'm glad you liked it.


  • albinoblacksheep720
    February 7

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    That was good

    I love the way you made this poem a part of life lessons. Moments do change our lives when we want to or not. Sometimes we look back at the past to see what made us change. That makes us question, or rather scared of what the future might bring. But, in the very end it was truly worth it. Nice job. Keep writing.

    • Xx-Erin-xX
      February 13
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      Thank you for reading and I also appreciate the comment. I'm glad you liked it.


  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    February 6

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    What about Subtle Moments?

    You use it in your write, and it's also kinda imaginative!

    I like it, anyway...

    My fave line?
    No one asks for their life to change
    But it does...
    This is so true!

    • Xx-Erin-xX
      February 6
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      Thank you for reading and I also appreciate the comment. I'm glad you liked it.

      When you asked "What about Subtle Moments?" I'm guessing you meant as the title. It's not a bad idea but it is only 1 of the 2 types of moments: "little, sublte moments" and "big moments that you never saw coming". Do you like either 1 of the titles ideas that I have in my ANs?


  • sidaul
    February 6

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    ... When I first saw this I thought, "wow, this is going to be horrendously cheesey." But this actually made me ponder a few things by coming out much more significant than I thought it had the ability to be.
    Apologies if that came out insulting. I meant it as a compliment.

    • Xx-Erin-xX
      February 6
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      Thank you for reading and I also appreciate the comment. I'm glad you liked it.

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      That didn't sound insulting at all. I have the same thoughts about some poems that I've read (I tend not to post those thoughts though).

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