As eyes close
a final time…
a kaleidoscope
of light swirls
and coalesces.
A zephyr’s song
calls to me.
I see a house
upon a verdant hill…
I see home.
Author notes
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Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://yokofashion.deviantart.com/art/the-voice-of-time-110240716
30 words (exactly 
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A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended February 6, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
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this is incredible deep poem. it's interesting how our hearts, our spirit knows where we ultimately belong. home is where the heart is. Beautiful poem, excellent..
good luck
kat
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Just beautiful!!! Wonderfully soft imagery is given by your lovely word choices! Home is always where the heart is, is it not???
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This poem is so sweet, leaving the reader of the sensation of knowing where their home is.
Beautifully penned.
Best of luck
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I hope you always know where home is... it's where you're loved unconditionally (like here)
Ken
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Lovely hun
A great poem that paints your thoughts so vividly
Good luck to you in the contest and best wishes
Julie
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Thank you Julie... What a great pic for an avatar! Obviously before your time (late 40's/early 50's?) Very cool, young lady...
Ken
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i like this it is very good.
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Thank you "Kritter" I appreciate that you found something worthwhile in my words.
Take care
Ken
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