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where am i?

i look around
and all i see
are trees
and a bee.

i listen to
the sounds around
and a river
is what i found.

as i swam

i heard a cat

i looked and looked

and there it sat.

 

it ran fast

at the sight of me

i followed it * gasp *

could it really be?

 

yes it was

the thunderclan camp

there was firestar the leader of thunderclan

they looked damp.

 

i tried to help 

they only hissed

then i fell over a kitten

i almost landed on it but i missed.

 

i got some twigs

to fix the camp wall

after that

they knew i was helping after all.

 

they came to like me

the good little cats

when the enemy came

i threw at them hats.

 

 

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its a book im reading that inspired me.

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  • wildfiredreamer
    February 7

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    I love you precious
    I am going to have to read some of these books
    glad to see you writing on here again
    love you
    mommy


  • pop123
    February 7
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    Nice poem. Its very good.


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    February 6

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    he hee

    How cute and delightful. I love you princess. I love the things you write. You have a good imagination. Love you always, Daddy


  • cupcakealia
    February 6
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    Lol!

  • memorymaker
    February 5
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    hee hee I love this. you are turning into a very talented poet. we miss you and love you


  • Blue Fire
    February 5
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    lolz

    i waz boerd

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