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[ in the darkness of the night ]

in the darkness of the night
it felt like things had lost their light
and there i wandered for countless years
saving up numerous tears
lost and alone with no where to turn
trapped in a fire that forever burns
i thought i was done and thought i would surely die
then i looked to the heavens and saw your eyes

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  • ElectricBloom
    February 5

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    aww, this is so wonderful.
    a beautiful twist at the end, it put a huge smile on my face.
    good rhyme throughout and excellent description.

    well done, i truly enjoyed reading this
    nice work!

    ElectricBloom