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The internal war that you fight alone is starting to take over my dreams.
Tremors and terrors I fight through just to know that you're ok.
Sharing an "I love you" , so that none can ever say it was never said, even if it was never felt.
I desire your desires, I lust for your love and I linger for peace for your sake.

 

Living this life the right way means winning this war for yesterday, tomorrow and right now.

Fear binding you to obligation and servitude forcing you to forget about you.

Death bringing you closer to me, in hopes that my hate for all things evil will send peace to your dreams only so that you can give up and give in to what you want most; Peace.

 

You have decided to take the path I have flirted with many times over again;Death. 

Stealing kisses to last you until hell opens it's gates for you.

Never having enough faith in me or yourself to see you through this war.

Always wanting more but being afraid to reach and touch it, to smell and taste it.

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Word list # 9

love
hate
life
death
peace
war

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  • August Starlight silver member
    February 25

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    This is VERY powerful and I can relate to it. Excellent word choice.
    Good write, thanks for sharing.


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    February 25

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    humz tis was nice, thought i felt there must be something more in it
    try it
    good luck in contest

    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • Spiritual Soul
    February 24
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    Wonderful write full of great images and emotion. Awesome write.
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • couldbeworse
    February 24
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    well done. thanks for sharing.


  • untouched pages
    February 23

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    I found this write to be full of imagery and emotion.. well done poet and good luck with the contest.. also thank you for posting this write for us to read!!


  • Peteskid gold member
    February 20
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    strong imagery here eternal consequence, virtue and passion, destruction and lost chances...seems like a flurry of things but the vision is always clear, all things are possible, good things are possible...PK

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