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Finally - He Dies

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Blood trickles down
from my finger.....tips
thirst          quenched

finally


Time stands still
as you die
slowly        screaming

finally


Your death was necessary
for centuries.....it was due
time          came

finally


I told you so
it was written
death        yours

finally


She murders the one....the one that had, for centuries, been the end of many good peoples lives.  It was written in her book, The List, that was not seen until now.  The day came and he was unprepared.  It was swift, he was unable to fight back, limbs numb, neck stung by the rips threw his flesh.

The world has now been saved from this retched being.  Never again will he be able to kill or control the living or the dead.

~vampira1665~

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  • owlishhunter
    February 5
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    I like the way this one is layed out...it adds to the credence of the piece. Good work darling!