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Restless

wind's blowing
leafs are dancing in the wind
a breathtaking sight.

petals snapping
floating on Njord's tongue
winter's toll collected.

bud freezing
bare in the blanket of snow
new beginning awaiting.

shoot's blossoming
a new crown praises its flower
the spring has resurrected.

Author notes

Just a quick poem written to get some subconscious thoughts on paper.
Written by Filip H.F. "FiXato" Slagter on Thursdays the 5th of February 2009

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